frustrations in composition pedagogy design

I'm putting together the common syllabus that will be taught by our 17 incoming TAs in the fall. It's not easy designing a syllabus that will be taught by 17 people you don't know, but that's not the frustration I want to talk about today.

My frustration is a technological one.

Here is what I need to have in a technological solution:

  • Create assignments and have students submit files in a variety of formats (text-only, video, image, audio, etc.). Most CMS can do this to some degree.
  • Share that student work with groups of students in the class, the whole class, and perhaps wider audiences. Most CMS can at least do the first two.
  • Provide feedback on these assignments (both peer and instructor) and assign grades. Again most CMS can do this, though the mechanisms for doing so in some systems are not very good, in my view. Also the reviewing capacity for non-text media is generally lacking.

So far, so OK. Here's where it starts to get trickier:

  • Allow students to create profile pages that are customizable, something like a WordPress site with a blog and with static pages that might serve as a repository and portfolio of their work. It would be great if this content could be exported in a format that would translate into other common blog formats (say as easy as migrating from Blogger to WordPress, which is to say not super-easy but doable). There should also be levels of sharing here: private, instructor-only, custom group inside the class, the whole class, and potentially larger audiences (e.g. the web). I haven't seen any CMS that do this.
  • Something Google+ like. An activity stream into which you can directly publish. Rather than user circles I think topical circles that would work something like conventional discussion threads do now. So every discussion post, blog entry, shared link, or general status update in a course would appear in each students activity stream. With only 22 students or so, it wouldn't be that much content to manage. Again, there is no CMS version of this very common kind of social media activity. 

I suppose you could say that on a minimal level I am looking to combine common features of CMS with common features of social media. That would probably be enough for the course I want to design for the fall, but I do have some more advanced requests. Let's be able to do all these things with mobile technology. And let's build some mobile apps that would facilitiate writing and research activity. To do this, we'd need to operate on a larger scale. Not the 22 students in the class but the 2500 students taking composition at UB each semester. For example:

  • I just posted on my blog. Find other student bloggers among the 2500 with similar interests. Maybe we would make a good peer group for reading each other's work. Maybe we can support each other in doing research.
  • I'm in the library (physical or virtual) and I find an interesting piece of research. Can I share a link? Can I find out if others are using it? Can I find out what other sources they used? Can I get any kind of recommendations based on community activity?
  • Can we do some writing version of dailymile? (I guess 750 words is something like this). Can I make a work plan and track it? Can I see what others are doing?
  • Can we leverage those 2500 students and 80 instructors as a powerful audience for student writing?

My last frustration is with finding content for the course. Writing Spaces is great for rhetorical instruction. What I need is around a dozen essays, videos, etc. that are more topical. I can't bring myself to charge students $50 for that, especially when I am not using the supporting materials in a reader AND I am not particularly happy with the selected content anyway. Especially when there is usable material freely available online (or available through our library). It's just that the work of sifting to find the right stuff is exhausting.

 I suppose I will be stuck with kludging together two systems. Anyway, back to it. 

incorporeality and expression in object-oriented rhetoric, politics and ethics

Speaking of problematic rhetorical performances, I hope to improve on my last one.

Levi Bryant has a couple interesting posts on rhetoric, politics, and ethics. As I was (not very successfully) trying to consider in my last post, I am seeing a growing engagement with Latour, OOO, and related theories on these topics. Sometimes this becomes an opportunity for critique, and elsewhere it is an application of nonhuman, OOO, and SR concepts. I have seen both of these moves result in difficulties as they move from concept into method.

A theory of politics and/or ethics begins with cognition and agency. That is, both politics and ethics are about making choices and acting upon them. These have obviously been a primary concern of rhetoric, both as a practice and as a discipline. I.e., how do I persuade my audience to take a particular political action or to view a particular choice as the ethical one? Latour makes a direct connection between these rhetorical concerns and objects in his articulation of an object-oriented democracy. I have been thinking about this for some time in terms of a Delanda-inflected assemblage theory. I see similiar thinking in Levi's discussion of populations, paths, and channels in his post on rhetoric. When we discuss, for example, the future of academic publication, we are raising these issues. We recognize that ideas are not ethereal. They are composed in particular assemblages and they are then mediated through assemblages. Thus, we need to examine the role of objects in our political and ethical deliberations.

But that is not nearly enough. If we continue to think of rhetoric, politics and ethics as human activities that are affected by objects, we have misunderstood the most important point here. The most important point is that rhetoric, politics, and ethics are not ours. In this respect, the first gesture of a flat ontological assemblage theory is that cognition and agency (and hence rhetoric, politics, and ethics as we practice them) are not the capstone rewards of human rationality or a divine gift, given over only to us and for us. Perhaps there isn't panpsychism, but we cannot assert that every object except for us operates by some brute mechanics. In fact, it is that predominant Modern view that has brought us to a situation where we see ourselves as increasingly mechanical. So this assemblage perspective is about tipping in the other direction. As Levi points out in his most recent post on Harman, withdrawal is at the center of OOO and offers a basis for agency: no object can be fully dominated by another; there is always hope and opportunity for agency.

We typically say that rhetoric, politics, and ethics require agency and cognition. However, as we extend these beyond a human domain, we might consider if the opposite is true or if these are somehow co-emergent phenomena. In any case, a more general theory of rhetoric--an object-oriented or nonhuman rhetoric (which is also inclusive of humans, so maybe nonhuman is not a good word choice here)--might offer us a valuable view on contemporary rhetorical challenges, one that is not available from the perspectives offered by our modern, print-centric view. So that's the long-term political-ethical payoff, I suppose. But we can't just leap to that. 

Within Delanda's (and Deleuze's) assemblage theory is a consideration of the "collective assemblage of enunciation," which is an investigation of expression. When symbolic behavior becomes involved, these expressions include what Deleuze and Guattari term "incorporeal transformations" (as when one is found guilty in a courtroom). Object-oriented perspectives are challenged by expression and incorporeality, which might suggest that there is something besides objects. As Deleuze and Guattari say, expression is autonomous and auto-objective. However, I don't really see this as an issue. To the contrary, I see this as potentially compatible with the concept of withdrawal and the agentic glitches withdrawal produces. Expression is a kind of exteriority (this would be contrary to conventional notions of "personal expression"). It is a capacity of objects in relation. It is also its own thing, an object, an expression. It is also a force and a process, but all objects are also forces and processes. Expressions have the capacity to affect the objects with which they relate. This capacity cannot be reduced to physical, electrical, chemical, and/or neurological forces. That would be undermining, to use Harman's term. Expression requires those forces (as all assemblages do) just as my body requires relations on an atomic level. 

When objects encounter one another as expressions (in addition to encounter one another as physical forces), they are having a rhetorical encounter (or at least that's my version). There is also the possibility of thought and action. And ethical and political concerns. Maybe incorporeal is the wrong word here, but what is suggested here is something more (or less) than an exchange of physical forces. The glitch of withdrawal creates the problem that becomes the assemblage, allows the capacity for thought and action to arise. 

As for ethics and politics, this point reminds me of Greg Ulmer's observation, "I assume that the ethical dilemma of self/other will not be solved in an electronic apparatus, but simply that it will become irrelevant, just as 'appeasing' the gods, which was the problem addressed by ritual, became irrelevant in literacy, even if ritual form--in theater --continued within literacy." It is difficult to hear the argument that ethical (and I would add political) problems are never solved but simply become irrelevant. How do the problems of inequality and marginalization become irrelevant? How do gods become irrelevant? When we stop appeasing gods it is not because drought or illness or whatever our rituals hoped to address is no longer a problem for us. Instead, we enter into a new assemblage with these problems, with new expressions, new thoughts, and new capacities for action.

It is hard to hear our political and critical engagement with the role of the other (women, immigrants, poor, people of color, and so on) being situated as analogous to the practice of appeasing the gods. It's hard to hear that because we "know" that there are no gods to appease and that this was just a "bad idea." As such this would suggest that racism or sexism are no more real than those gods, and to make that suggestion would be to risk being called an intellectual traitor or worse, a conservative. But from a flat ontological perspective, those gods were real, as real as Popeye or Harry Potter or any object with expressive force. Try telling the people with their hearts cut out on an altar that the gods weren't real. As I suggested in my last post, everything is real; everything is equally real (though as Bogost points out, they do not exist equally). So I am not suggesting that the ethical dilemma of the self/other is not real. It certainly is.

What I am suggesting is that by examining expression as a component of an object-oriented, nonmodern (if not nonhuman) rhetoric, we get a different view of the problems/assemblages into which we enter. This is the challenge I think we face rhetorically and methodologically, to not view an OOR as a way to solve already existing problems but as a problem/assemblage generator producing new agency, thought, and ethics.

the object industry

My spring semester run of conferences is just about over: CCCC, Computers and Writing, and now Rhetoric Society of America. I haven’t seen much at RSA because we came down to Philly as a family. However I have hit a couple panels. One thing I’ve noted across these conferences is a growing interest in “objects:” sometimes in a Latourian sense, sometimes OOO, and sometimes in ways it’s hard to discern. I want to assert at the outset here that I am hardly the OOO style, let along “thought,” police. I don’t know what an object-oriented rhetoric should necessarily become. I am simply interested in what it might become. 

 That said, I think there are cautionary tales in the literary deconstruction industry in the 80s and the industry surrounding Foucault and cultural studies, which in many ways continues to chug along in my discipline and others. Perhaps having such broad academic influence would be a nice problem for Latour or the OOO folks to have. I suppose one could think of it that way. However I would tend to see it more as the reterritorialization of a new philosophy/method/theory. Typically we have thought about such matters in political/ideological terms wherein purportedly politically committed theories become little more than means toward tenure, little more than a way of talking about things. In the case of this burgeoning “object industry” though, I think there is a more fundamental methodological incompatibility here. 

 We have already seen this in the discussion a few months ago about whether or not an object-oriented literary criticism was feasible. I have seen some of this questioning in my own field, and I think it is very important. That said, to me, it doesn’t make so much sense to ask “how can we do OOO or ANT and keep doing what we are doing?” Similarly, I am not so interested in the criticism that OOO or ANT isn’t useful because it doesn’t help us do what we are doing. These are the errors of those past cautionary tales. Deconstruction becomes another way to perpetuate close reading. Foucault and cultural studies become ways to legitimize the already existing political projects of composition classrooms.

I am sympathetic to the contention that we need to move from general theorizing about objects and networks in my field into a more precise investigation of specific objects and networks. Unfortunately ANT is not really a “method” (at least if we accept Latour’s claims) and OOO certainly is not a method, at least not yet (though Bogost’s book moves in that direction). As such the application of theory as method is not so easily done; it is in that transition that slippage toward familiar gestures is all too easy. 

David Berry does a fair job of encapsulating some of these concerns in a recent post. I think he very astutely examines the rhetorical/stylistic practices of OOO itself. While I agree with Levi Bryant's view that an object-oriented rhetoric is a more interesting area of investigation than the rhetoric of OOO scholarship, the two are not wholly inseparable. Berry  notes, as others have, that a common practice is the Latourian litany, which offers up a picture of flat ontology. Though Berry doesn’t make this observation, litany is itself a peculiar word choice. Aside from its alliterative appeal, the litany is, of course, a religious practice, primarily Christian (e.g. think rosary beads), and the word comes from the Greek for supplication. While I wouldn’t want to take those observations too far, the supplication here isn’t in repetition but rather to the rhetorical and aesthetic effect of lists or juxtaposition, an effect that is typically understood in terms of metaphor. However, I am unsatisfied with “metaphor” as the default relationality among objects. 

Berry’s more significant criticism however points to the contradiction in OOO (and other nonhuman theories) simultaneously insisting that humans are not special actors while also addressing humans in a way that is uniquely suited for us. This apparent turning away from human concerns becomes at the very least a rhetorical/tactical problem for OOO if not a deeper conceptual problem. As Berry writes,

In this ‘liberation’ therefore, we are saved from the ‘crushing’ problem of repetitive accounts of marginal inequality and suffering. This is achieved by a new ‘humanism’ that rejects the human as having any special case, such that the marginal problems of women, LGBT, immigrants, asylum seekers, and the poor are replaced with the problem of a litany of objects such as “quarks, Elizabeth Bennet, single-malt scotch, Ford Mustang fastbacks, lychee fruit, love affairs, dereferenced pointers, Care Bears, sirocco winds, the Tri-City Mall, tort law, the Airbus A330, the five-hundred drachma note” (Bogost 2012a: 133).

I think this is a now familiar concern with OOO. In fact, if we wanted to continue with the intersections between OOO and programming, we might even call it a “known issue.” It is, in part, why I have had a longstanding interest in the ethical dimension of an object-oriented rhetoric. In part, I believe the issue begins with how one understands the notion of “special.” By special do we mean singular? If so, then all objects have their own singularity in OOO. By special do we mean to suggest asymmetrical relations where one object is more powerful or significant than others? I don’t think that a flat ontology denies the exist of asymmetrical relations. It doesn’t deny that humans are more important for humans than other objects or that humans can, and often do, have asymmetrical roles in the networks in which they participate. What a flat ontology does refute is the idea that the universe has some inherent great chain of being that puts humans at or near the top. What a flat ontology does critique, in a Latourian style, is the divide of humans and nonhumans in the modern world that puts ALL the agency on the human side. 

While "free will" may still be the prevailing cultural viewpoint and basis for mainstream political discourse, in the academic humanities (which is where this conversation is taking place and the site of these critiques), there is an opposite condition: the postmodern crisis of agency. OOO can’t strip women, the poor or any marginalized group of its agency to act because that train has already left the station. That agency was stripped (in theory) by the theoretical positions from which academics are now critiquing a nonhuman approach. Tell me again whose theory argues that human agency is impinged by colonialism, patriarchy, global capitalism, etc? Whose theory argues that agency is only an ideological illusion or a play of signification?

It would make no sense for a nonhuman, flat ontological position to deny the real, material/objective existence of marginalization. How could one argue for the reality of Popeye (or whatever else might pop up in a litany) but deny the reality of marginalization? Similarly it would make little sense to deny that for humans these human concerns are more important than the relations among pebbles in my backyard.  I don’t think that’s the point of the nonhuman turn. Instead, what I see in an object-oriented approach is an effort to retheorize agency that doesn’t begin with the premise that agency is a special quality of humans, something that emerges at the top of an asymmetrical ontology but rather articulates agency as an emergent capacity along a flat ontology. Are the agentic capacities of humans unique? Yes, but that might be said of all objects.

My own scholarly concerns are more modest than saving humanity from oppression. Or perhaps it is more accurate to say that I focus my concerns on particular areas of marginalization, like higher education, the humanities, or even the writing classroom. We certainly can (and have) critiqued “academic discourse” (whatever that is) as racist, sexist, homophobic, colonialist, capitalist, etc., etc. (and that would be the humanities' most familiar litany).  We have unveiled the role of a hegemonic ideology that prevents our students from recognizing the Truth of our professorial viewpoints. We have sympathized with our students’ loss of agency in all this. And we have told many stories of pedagogy’s heroic efforts in response.

I can certainly see, in this microcosm of the larger debate, how such critical efforts might respond to the investigations of a nonhuman, flat ontological approach. When we start talking about the role of objects and networks in composing, then this is can be (and sometimes is) critiqued as an attack upon human agency and more importantly as an attack against the political commitments of these theories. However, I don't see it that way. In my view, there are real objective conditions that we are trying to account for when we speak of free will or agency or ideology or marginalization. In fact, I am probably more willing to assert the real-ness of those conditions than scholars in cultural studies, etc. Our disagreement is over how we account for these conditions. 

As I see it, having been raised (professionally speaking) in the nineties height of cultural studies and postmodern theory, there is no real explanation there for how ideology functions. And when I say real, what I mean is that the explanations exist solely in the frames of representation and discourse. These are clearly important elements to examine, but they strike me as insufficient. We can speak about the material effects of representation/discourse (e.g. arguing that advertisements affect body image leading to eating disorders) but we have a difficult time accounting for the compositional processes. To use an analogy, we have a kind of spontaneous generation theory (e.g. flies spontaneously generate from dead animals). Our methodological shortcoming, I believe, is that we try to account for all of this strictly in terms of representation and discourse. 

As for agency, well, we don't have a theory of agency; we have a problem of agency: there isn't any. Berry speaks about the perfomative contradictions in OOO. However, our legacy theories have a far deeper performative contradiction inasmuch as they argument for the totalizing ideological power of discourse and then try to pull some revolutionary (or at least resistant) agency out of the hat at the end. If it makes no sense to speak to humans about nonhuman objects, it makes even less sense to plot revolution with humans that have no agency. 

That is why, in my view, the long-term goal of an object-oriented approach is to develop a better theory of agency: better in the sense that it more accurately describes the roles of objects-in-relation that compose agentic capacities as real and better in the sense that it results in tactics and strategies that expand our capacities. Again, I'm not in the world-saving division of the humanities. However, I do have an objective of expanding our students' capacities as writers. For me, this begins with describing the roles objects play in compositional networks.

Admittedly all the talk of quarks, scotch, fruit, and whatever else appears in a Latourain litany may seem quite distant from such goals. I do think of it as somewhat analogous to "pure research" in the sciences. I believe we need to think through what a nonhuman, nonsymbolic rhetoric might be. This would produce an ontological basis on which to build this kind of work. We also need to distance ourselves from our legacy notions and get a fresh perspective. To bring this post full circle, it is for this reason that I remain concerned about a burgeoning "object industry" in my field. It's great to see this engagement with this issues. At the same time, I hope we can use this as an opportunity to really think differently.... not that we ultimately need to all get on board with a particular point of view or method but taking up a new method to continue business as usual doesn't get us very far. I hope we don't do that.

 

composing objects and other C & W keynotes

Thanks to Dan Anderson (@iamdan) for recording this. I've also included Dave Parry's video. When Anne Wysocki's becomes available, I'll add it.

 


glitches are us

At Computers and Writing, I was asked several times about my discussion of glitches in my keynote talk. Since I was addressed the New Aesthetic, a discussion of glitches was inevitable. However, I then moved on to think about the glitch as a "key ontological condition." As I see it, this is another way of thinking about the way problems become multiplicities and then assemblages in Deleuze. A glitch is a problem, but it is also an assemblage. Moreover, in its original usage (by John Glen, the astronaut, in 1962), a glitch was a voltage surge in a circuit. So I also want to think about the glitch as intensity.

Typically we think of the glitch as a problem-to-be-fixed. Glitches interfere with our ability to see or act as we might hope. But what the new aesthetic and many speculative realist philosophies point out is that the technologies we build do not extend our perception or agency in relation to a pre-existing real world; instead they produce a new hybridized realm. It's not a purely discursive or social realm! That's the misstep so many have made in reading Latour, that the insistence that technologies construct knowledge means that knowledge is social or discursive only. In OOO terms here we might think of "nature" as overmining. There is no pre-existing nature into which objects are situated or that provides a space in which we act. The glitch is perceived as error because it imagines that devices ought to mediate reality without error.  Once one recognizes that can't happen then glitches are seen differently. That doesn't mean that one can't repair a glitch in the sense of fixing a device so it operates more in the way one wants, but it does mean that we can't view glitches as wholly fixable.

As I noted in my last post, we might think of correlationism as a fundamental philosophical glitch. If we imagine that a real world exists out there, but we can't really access it because of the limitations of human perception, cognition, and language, then we could reasonably call that a glitch. We build technologies and institutions to mitigate that glitch (or at least to attempt to do so), but we can't ever truly repair it. Absolute knowledge of a pure natural world is beyond our reach. However, one of the implications of OOO is that objects do not exist in a way that would allow for absolute knowledge. In other words, this isn't a human glitch; this glitch is a fundamental ontological condition. 

In my view, it is this glitch that allows for our experience of thought and agency. In a world of pure knowledge, purely communicated, there would be no need for thought or any need to make a decision. But that isn't the world we live in. If I had pure knowledge, I would know, without thinking, what to say next, but I don't. I have to think about it. Whatever agency we attribute to our subjective experience exists inasmuch as the subjective relations with both the external world and our internal processes are glitchy and leave some uncertain space. The character of that uncertainty depends upon the capacities that emerge through our relations. 

So if thought and agency are the products of glitches, we might think of them as analogous to those voltage spikes in a circuit, as excessive points of intensification. When I perceive an object, I enter into this glitchy relation with it. That encounter is productive of these intensifications, which might be more or less intense to be sure, but even seeing the color of the flower pot before me is an excitement of the optical system to some level. I can then have a wide range of phenomenological and aesthetic responses. While those responses are not exactly in my control, they are not determining (unless you throw the flower pot at me and then maybe I duck out of reflex). All of these perceptions, sensations, and intensifications are as materially real as the flower pot or my body. There is a virtually bottomless rabbit hole of relation here, which one might think of as the withdrawal of objects from one another: a procedural rabbit hole that cannot undermine the objects participating in this relation. So all these objects are real and real glitchy. 

In all this we can see composing, and the apparent objections of composing, as the glitches that introduce thought and agency (and rhetoric) but also allow us to understand composing as natural, technological, discursive, and social all at once. 

Composing objects: prospects for a digital rhetoric #cwcon

Below is the text of my keynote talk from the Computers and Writing conference. There was a video made, so I will include that when it becomes available. Thanks to everyone on NC State for making the conference so successful, as well as everyone who attended.

Last year, at a town hall meeting on digital humanities, I said that one of the things I like about this conference is that it operates on the basis of affinity rather than membership. And I meant that quite literally; there’s nothing to be a member of here. As such it has a less territorializing motive than other conferences, which perhaps also makes it slightly more precarious. Our unifying principle is a t-shirt. However, I would like to amend that claim today and characterize our affinity as a shared interest in composing, but I am reluctant to do that. I am reluctant because composing quickly becomes composition and captures us within the gravitational force of our discipline. That is, it becomes a form of membership rather than an affinity. So I need to proceed carefully.

There’s no doubt that part of our interest in composing is a disciplinary interest. However, I imagine that our interest precedes and exceeds that disciplinary connection. More importantly, at least for the purposes of my talk today, composing, this object with which we share an affinity, exceeds our disciplinary interests, exceeds our combined relations. And this is how I come to the subject of my remarks: “Composing Objects.” Not composing objects, as in the tools we use to compose or the process by which we compose objects, but rather the objections, the obstacles, that composing raises. It is admittedly unusual to address composing as a thing and even stranger as a thing that raises objections. Composing offers an excellent encapsulation of a bifurcated ontology, bifurcated at least in our limited ability to understand it, constituting both object and process, thing and activity. Composing is a thing we do, and as we know, composing doesn’t always work out as planned. Composing objects to our will. It is not a mute, neutral tool waiting to serve. Our interest in composing is what brings us into ongoing contact with the world. By composing it becomes difficult to imagine we are alone in our minds with our ideas, particularly when we take up new composing objects that make unexpected demands. 

Behind me you can see some images and videos cycling. These are all examples of what is being called the “New Aesthetic.” In a few minutes I will be discussing the new aesthetic in some detail, but, as way of introduction, I will say that the new aesthetic is an investigation into the aesthetics of digital objects, not so much our aesthetic experience with digital art or design but rather the aesthetic experiences of the objects themselves, how they perceive and respond to the world. Just as it is difficult to imagine composing raising objections, it is difficult to extend aesthetic responses to a camera, an arphid scanner, or a software application designed to read and score student essays.  Objections and aesthetics are bundled together in the realm of subjectivity, and for centuries, in the modern world, we have worked hard to separate the realm of natural and technoscientific objects from the social, human realm where aesthetics are ordinary. No doubt you are having aesthetic responses to your lunch right now, and objections are possible. In fact, you might be formulating them as I speak.

And yet, despite those objections, we know it takes a great deal of effort to keep the human world and the world of objects separate. We see the contradictions of this work in our own field of computers and writing. Clearly we recognize the significant role that technologies play in rhetorical practice. In branching out into digital scholarship, we encounter the objections of technologies to our plans all the time, though we may not articulate them as such. And when we mutter under our breath that some damn application doesn’t want to let us do something, we know we don’t really mean that, don’t really mean to extend to some object some kind of agency to object. But I am suggesting that perhaps we should. We see composing practices shifting all around us. Even beyond this hall and beyond this discipline, there is a familiar conversation of the effects of technology upon writing, usually in some alarmist tone, or alternately in a celebratory one. But even then, we speak of mute tools devoid of their own agency or sensibility.

I’m sure we each can offer theories as to why this is the case. And I am not here today to assign blame, to scold, or even to rally the troops. Instead, I want to offer a perspective on what might be at stake here for us and why this digital technological shift has been so difficult for the humanities as we watch the marketplace, many industries, and broad swaths of our culture leave us behind. And I want to begin with two quotes from 20 years ago, the first coming from Lester Faigely’s Fragments of Rationality, published in 1992. The book appears at a time when our field was trying to understand the role of postmodernism and cultural studies, hence it’s subtitle: postmodernity and the subject of composition. Faigley writes, “many of the fault lines in composition studies are disagreements over the subjectivities that teachers of writing want students to occupy” (17). We can read this two ways. First, Faigley was observing that the disagreements among composition scholars could be understood in terms of the different ways they theorized subjectivity. This is perhaps still true, though the theories have changed somewhat. The second more complicated reading focuses on the desires of teachers for students to occupy particular subjective positions. That is, fault lines emerge over our desire for students to think and feel, or at least behave, in certain ways. Faigley devotes a chapter to the development of the networked classroom and specifically his practice of having his students participate in a chatroom using pseudonyms. His ambivalence over the results is emblematic of the ways in which we have understood composing as a matter of discourse, culture, ideology, and subjectivity, even when we introduce matters of technology. Why is it, even when we focus upon technology, we turn to subjectivity and discourse? We hold out the hope that technology will offer some solution to an ideological problem. As this famous New Yorker cartoon from 1993, suggests: the Internet can solve the problems of identity. And when it doesn’t, when it instead exacerbates them, as Faigley discovers, then that becomes a criticism.  What relationship do we imagine exists among technological objects, language, and social relations that we come to formulate not only the Internet but also our discipline in these ways?

The second quote comes from Bruno Latour’s We Have Never Been Modern, which was published in 1991 and appeared in English in 1993. It is a text that has become increasingly familiar to our field in the last decade, though was far less so 20 years ago. Here Latour argues that “So long as humanism is constructed through contrast with the object that has been abandoned to epistemology, neither the human nor the nonhuman can be understood. Where are we to situate the human?” Is this the same question that Faigley’s teachers of writing ponder regarding the subjectivities students occupy? I don’t believe it is, and it is in the shift that underlies the difference between these positions that we might find prospects for a digital rhetoric. Latour’s central argument, simply put, is that the divide we have created between the natural world and the social world is untenable. To be sure, we have discussed materiality and material conditions to no end, but almost always in the context of discourse and ideology. Rarely have we consider objects themselves, let alone the objections they might raise.

Though we have seen a growing interest in Latour in our field, I think it is important to note the ambivalent role of rhetoric and writing in his work. In his well-known investigation of the modern split of the world into social and natural spaces, Latour often speaks of this division in terms of two kinds of representation: political representation in a social sphere and scientific representation in the description of the natural world. These are his two branches of government and “the representation of nonhumans belongs to science, but science is not allowed to appeal to politics; the representation of citizens belongs to politics, but politics is not allowed to have any relation to the nonhumans produced and mobilized by science and technology” (We Have Never Been Modern, 28). Rhetoric, or more precisely, symbolic behavior, stands in between. 

Speaking subjects are transformed into so many fictions generated by meaning effects; as for the author, he is no longer anything but the artifact of his own writings. The objects being spoken of become reality effects gliding over the surface of the writing. Everything becomes sign and sign system: architecture and cooking, fashion and mythology, politics -even the unconscious itself. (63)

This poststructuralist, linguistic turn is familiar language for us. Latour’s complaint is not that discourse comes to play this mediating role but rather the manner in which we have kept science, nature, and language as separate non-communicating spaces. Instead, the fundamental call of Latour’s work is to bring these spaces into communication with one another in the production of hybrid or quasi-objects. And this is the strange place where computers and writing has resided for thirty years, in a field that concerns itself with discourse and with the social, it has investigated technological objects. It has been difficult over that time to frame our discussions of technology except in terms of ideological, social forces or subjective, psychological effects. At the same time, our investigation of digital technologies offers a significant opportunity to stitch back together these three realms. Latour recognizes this as well when he discusses writing and later compositionism.

In this extended passage from Reassembling the Social Latour describes writing

we, who have been trained in science studies, don’t need to ignore the thickness of any given text, its pitfalls, its dangers, its awful way to make you say things you don’t want to say, its opacity, its resistance, its mutability, its tropism.We know too well that, even in ‘hard’ sciences, authors clumsily try to write texts about difficult matters of concern. There is no plausible reason why our texts would be more transparent and unmediated than the reports coming out of their laboratories. Since we are all aware that fabrication and artificiality are not the opposite of truth and objectivity, we have no hesitation in highlighting the text itself as a mediator. But for this very same reason, we don’t have to abandon the traditional goal of reaching objectivity simply because we consider with great care the heavy textual machinery. Our texts, like those of our fellow scientists, run the parallel course of being artificial and  accurate: all the more accurate because  they are artificial. But our texts, like those of our fellow scientists, run the risk of being simply  artificial, that is full of artifacts. The difference is not between those who know for certain and those who write texts, between ‘scientific’ and ‘literary’ minds, between ‘esprit de ge´ome´trie’  and ‘esprit de finesse ’, but between those who write bad texts and those who write good ones. (124)

I would say this could also be true for those of us who have been trained in rhetoric. Certainly the first part is largely true of rhetoricians. We recognize the thickness of texts. I am less sure if “we” share the awareness that fabrication is not the opposite of objectivity but rather that artificiality and accuracy are partners. This is the other key element of Latour’s work for us: his recognition that representation, whether political or scientific, is constructed from the deployment of quasi-objects, but that this construction does not itself make the representations any less accurate or objective. The real question is not whether something is constructed or true but whether the construction, the composition, is good or bad. As I see it, the difficulty that we might have recognizing the objections of composing might be tied to the challenge of understanding the link become the artificial and the accurate. If we imagine knowledge as built from a network of other objects, then perhaps we can also see the way in which those objects’ objections would participate in the act of composing. Of course, the term “objection” might still seem to be injecting an unnecessary vitalism into these objects, but I want to suspend that concern for a moment and introduce the other theme of this talk, the prospects of a digital rhetoric.

In his recent “Compositionist Manifesto,” Latour connects his interest in composing directly with a pressing exigency: our ecological crisis. In doing so, he calls for a different notion of the future than the one offered by modernity and so many manifestos. Just as he described his actor-network theory as a process of slowly following trails, like an ant, the action of compositionism is “one of tentative and precautionary progression . There is still a movement. Something is still going forward. But ... the tenor is entirely different” (473). My topic this afternoon is not the environment, but I am interested in our notions of futurity. I believe rhetoric and composition, and computers and writing in particular, are unique in the humanities for the degree to which they concern themselves with the future. If we think of the digital humanities as an effort to grapple with emerging technologies, we might likewise see digital rhetoric and composition as meeting the rhetorical challenges of the future. And it is here that I believe that the affinity we share with Latour for composing suggests a shared view on how the future should be constructed “from utterly heterogeneous parts that will never make a whole, but at best a fragile, revisable, and diverse composite material” (474). 

This is a departure from the modern view of the future. Undoubtedly modernity defined itself by its break with the past, the familiar refrain to “make it new.” For Latour, however, the modern emphasis on the future was always formed by looking backward, as an escape from the past. As such, he seeks a different kind of invention, one that is made facing forward, looking at the object to be composed, but more importantly a composition that recognizes its hybridity, its intermixing of the natural, social, and discursive. I believe these are also our concerns in computers and writing. Those of us who have maintained computer labs or networks. Those who have built websites or software. And those who have run writing programs or scholarly publications. We have all had the opportunity to see composing in this way, as building from heterogeneous parts. It is likely that we have all encountered the humanities as a particularly backwards-looking enterprise; we have seen the backwards-looking futures our disciplines have built. And Latour is not asking us to abandon the past. After all, that is the modernist call, to look to the past in order to depart from it, to employ our hybrid devices to keep the various realms of modernity separate. However, computers and writing, of necessity, cannot function that way. It implicitly recognizes the hybridity of machine, discourse, and subject. Perhaps we have not always found a way to compose from that hybridity, perhaps we have found ourselves doing the work of modernity, but that prospect is there for us and for others, as we can see in the work of the New Aesthetic.

The images that have been cycling behind me are part of a shift that is going on around us and is deeply involved in this changing notion of how objects are being viewed. The term “new aesthetic” was coined by London designer, James Bridle in a blog post, and he maintained a tumblr for a year where he collected examples of the new aesthetic, including most the images you are seeing here.  Bridle says

One of the core themes of the New Aesthetic has been our collaboration with technology, whether that’s bots, digital cameras or satellites (and whether that collaboration is conscious or unconscious), and a useful visual shorthand for that collaboration has been glitchy and pixelated imagery, a way of seeing that seems to reveal a blurring between “the real” and “the digital”, the physical and the virtual, the human and the machine. It should also be clear that this ‘look’ is a metaphor for understanding and communicating the experience of a world in which the New Aesthetic is increasingly pervasive.

So whether we are looking at pixelated sculptures, computer glitches, splinter camouflage, or digital infoscapes, the new aesthetic is partly a world designed to be perceived by machines and partly an attempt to represent human aesthetic encounters with the digital world. Bridle views the new aesthetic as a response to the popularity of nostalgic design, steampunk for example, that implies that real human, aesthetic experience has been short-circuited by digital technologies. One way of thinking about this is that in our nostalgic reflections the past does not glitch. 

Of course, we are not idiots. We understand that the past was not truly idyllic. However, our pre-digital past gives us access to an imaginary time when the division of the world into nature, society, and discourse seemed more tenable. Today we have a virtual world where physical spaces are interpenetrated with digital information. In such formulations, we can still see the borderlines between the physical, the discursive or informational, and us. When the computer glitches, we take this as a reminder of those borders. Pixels are glitch. Minecraft is a glitchy world. We view glitches as technological flaws to overcome and perhaps as evidence of the limits of human planning or design.

But I would prefer to think of the glitch as a key ontological condition.

The word “glitch” is interesting in itself. It was first used by astronauts in 1962, specifically John Glenn, to describe a sudden change or spike in voltage. There is some contention that the word comes from German and Yiddish words for slipping. Perhaps there is a onomatopoetic quality to the term. If you could hear a voltage spike in a circuit, maybe it would sound like glitch. Glitch was almost immediately both a noun and a verb, and today we also speak of glitching in reference to the gamer activity of taking advantage of programming glitches. I would like to expand that use. As in, I spend a good amount of my time as a WPA glitching university bureaucracy. My point is that glitches are everywhere, and they are features not bugs.

Perhaps the most significant philosophical glitch is that which Quentin Meillassoux characterizes as correlationism: “the idea according to which we only ever have access to the correlation between thinking and being, and never to either term considered apart from the other” (7). Also termed philosophies of access, correlationism describes the post-Kantian position wherein we are never able to access the world directly, but can only access it through language and thought. We can never know the world in terms other than our own, and as such we can never really know the world. Rhetoric operates within this correlationist frame, focusing conventionally on symbolic behavior with the premise that we do not have direct access to the world referenced by the symbols. And, to be clear, I am not here today to argue that we do have the kind of direct access that is imagined as lost. But, like Latour, I am unwilling to accept the premise that the natural, the discursive, and the social are separate realms. Instead, we might have a kind of hybrid or quasi access: a glitchy access if you prefer. Of course we cannot have access to some pure natural world of unconstructed, unmediated truths, because that world does not exist beyond our Modern imaginations of it. On the flipside, we cannot reside in some world of signs or a purely social milieu, because those worlds do no exist either. As such one might say that humans are glitchy. We lack perfect vision, perfect reason, and perfect communication. We identify our imperfections as the limits of our agency and build technologies to overcome those limits. 

But what if we view these glitches as features rather than bugs? What if glitches were the source of agency and thought rather than their limits? If so, then we might also recognize the objections in composing as integral to the process. Cameras, GPS satellites, facial recognition software: we adopt such technologies as an extension of our sensorium. But as the New Aesthetic explores, in doing so we do not create a seamless expansion of our perception of a natural world but rather progressively build out another glitchy realm.

The New Aesthetic has been connected to the philosophical movement termed speculative realism, with which Meillassoux is often associated, and with a particular brand of speculative realism called object-oriented ontology, of which the most well-known investigators are Graham Harman, Ian Bogost, Levi Bryant, and Tim Morton. 

Of these, Ian Bogost’s most recent work strikes me as most directly taking up these issues, specifically his discussion of carpentry. By carpentry, he not only references the familiar sense of the term but also its use in philosophy by Graham Harman and Alphonso Lingis as the process by which objects compose each other and their world: a concern that is embedded in the new aesthetic. In his book, Alien Phenomenology, Bogost devotes a chapter to carpentry and focuses heavily on writing, particularly the writing of humanities scholars. As he notes, and I am sure we are all aware, “even given the trends in digital publishing and online distribution, including blogs and open access presses, questions about the material form of published work go unasked and unanswered. The answer is obvious: writing, always writing” (88). He notes two problems with this focus. First, academics are not necessarily good writers. This may seem like a cheap shot, but if we dislocate the perception of bad writing from the individuals and put it into the network, as I would suggest that we should do with student writers as well, we can see this as a productive observation. Poor compositions can be addressed as network effects, as glitches. We can treat those glitches as problems to be fixed by revising the compositional networks. Or we can investigate those glitches as compositional objections that might tell us something about the world we inhabit. Both are useful approaches. 

However, even when written compositions are strong, they are limited, as Bogost explains with his second concern: “writing is dangerous for philosophy... not because writing breaks from its origins as Plato would have it, but because writing is only one form of being” (90). Writing is arguably a more complex tool than a hammer but the analogy might work here. If the hammer sees everything in the world as a nail, perhaps writing sees everything in the world as discourse. Bogost suggests that humanists might benefit from extralinguistic modes of engaging the outdoors. 

I might respond to Ian’s argument by saying that at this conference at least, questions of the material form of published work do not go unasked and that many of the panels here have offered answers to this question. We have gone well beyond the efforts of MLA and university presses to address digital scholarship and publication, which I believe still remain heavily indebted to legacy scholarship practices. If we look at the history of a journal like Kairos that begins with the web page, hyperlink, image moves through the multimedia of Flash and Director toward video and social media. And now there are games and software and mobile devices that we seek to build and employ in our work. And it is not only digital technology, a point both this conference and Bogost have emphasized. But despite this, we are far, far from addressing such matters to the extent that we might. And we might begin with the suggestion of agency that lies behind the objections of composing. 

As we know, agency is a perpetual problem for rhetoric and composition and for the humanities. It is evident in Faigely’s remark about the subjectivities we want students to occupy, in our conceptions of power, ideology, and discourse, in our hopes for empowerment, and in the implicit agency that allows us to hold students accountable for our evaluation of their compositions. Part of the modern constitution was its attribution of agency to one side of the equation. Humans have free will that is divinely granted or a product of rationality or both. Agency is the pinnacle of being human, but as such also the human quality that is most easily threatened, by technology, by government, by materiality, or perhaps even twinkies as the apocryphal legal defense goes.

However it is also possible to locate agency in a very different place, in the virtual, potential spaces that emerge within and among objects. It is imprecise to say that agency is simply the ability to act freely, that is, the ability to act in a way that is not solely determined by some external force; it is also the ability to act in a way that is determined by the self. It’s not that I can order anything from the menu but that I can order the specific thing that I want. When I am suggesting that composition objects it is not simply that it acts as an obstacle, not responding in the way we have determined composition should respond, as in this talk isn’t going where I intended for it to go. I am also suggesting that composition, as an object or a network of objects, makes decisions in much the same way as we order soup, which is to say out of habit or by some social pressure or with regret or uncertainty, etc. etc. Now perhaps this might be taken as some form of panpsychism, but we might also recognize agency as a product of relational capacities rather than strictly inhered characteristics.

I would like the tomato soup.

That doesn’t seem to work. Is it more accurate to say that I have the inherent agency to order soup or that it is a capacity that emerges when I am sitting in a restaurant? If we think of agency in the latter sense then we have something closer to distributed cognition. Knowledge is produced and decisions are made in the network or relations. Does this mean that humans have no capacity for thought or agency on their own? Not exactly, because we are already the emergent phenomenon of other relations that compose our bodies. We cannot be reduced to those parts or their qualities anymore than our subjective sense is the totality of the parts that compose it. However, since humans do not exist in a vacuum, at least not for very long, human thought and agency is almost always produced out of the capacities that we develop in relation to other objects. And humans are not special in this way. The capacities we produce may be singular, but our development of capacities is not.

Bogost offers an example of the compositional objections of technology in his discussion of two different sensors working in different camera brands. As he notes, most cameras use a Bayer sensor where each photocell is sensitive to one light wavelength: red, blue, or green. The Foveon sensor, however, measures each wavelength at each photocell. In theory, the Foveon sensor should result in pictures with  better color and resolution. However users discovered that the colors of objects would shift when the camera’s light sensitivity or ISO was altered. Where the Bayer sensor was meant to mimic the way non-digital cameras worked, the Foveon sensor employs a different algorithm. Neither camera has agency over how it senses the color green anymore than I do. However each camera is expressing a phenomenological experience, just as I am. The response of the Foveon sensor is analogous to the human experience of mesopic vision, when our eyes of confused by dim light and keep switching between cones and rods, between color and monochrome. Bogost writes, “just as the bat’s experience of perception differs from our understanding of the bat’s experience of perception, so the camera’s experience of seeing differs from our understanding of its experience. But unlike the bat, the Foveon-equipped Sigma DP provides us with exhaust from which we can derive a phenomenal metaphor to chronicle that experience” (72).

Here we can see my iphone camera is seeing part of the audience, translating those light waves into digital information, communicating that data wirelessly with my laptop, which is then using a specific application to reproduce that image on my screen. Of course then it is also going out the external monitor into the projector and finally reflecting back into your eyes. There is no doubt that in each step there is some design concern that intersects with the expectations of human vision. However, there are obviously many other economic and technological considerations we could name. Furthermore, we could, hypothetically, investigate the many different actor-networks that  participated in the production of each of these processes and devices that are now linked together to bring you this image. Where do we locate the agency that produces this image? How do we describe the cognitive work involved in its composition? It is certainly more than my decision about where to point the lens. It’s not so simple as saying that the lens has agency or thinks, but it is also not so simple as saying that I am the lone thinking agent in this compositional network.

In the nonhuman outdoors of composing objects, rhetoric has a significant role and we might investigate that role if we can manage to extricate ourselves from the anthropocentric symbolic action that has largely defined our discipline in the modern era. In my view, rhetoric, a minimal rhetoric as I have called it, operates in all relations that have a capacity to generate cognition and agency. We see these relations in house flies, slime molds, and bacterial colonies. We see them in robots and software. Certainly, as Bogost reminds us, we are seeing the exhaust from which we can derive a phenomenal metaphor. Or to put it in Latour’s terms, we must compose that knowledge.  There is no doubt that these compositions are limited, not only by the limitations of our human perspective but also by the objections that composing raises for us. At this conference, we share an affinity for composing, not simply the disciplinary interest in composition as an institutional task, but Latour’s compositionism as well. We claim an interest in the composing of, by, with, and for digital technologies and spaces. I am increasingly certain that we are entering an ever-stranger compositional environment where the rhetorical roles we imagined for ourselves as modern humans will not function, where the quasi-objects that have mediated our democratic, cultural, and intellectual discourses will no longer remain silent. Today, we measure the output of digital data in zettabytes and acknowledge the growing role of machine-generated data as more and more objects become “smart” and networked.

As I see it, the prospects for a digital rhetoric might begin with an investigation of the rhetorical operation of these objects so that we might understand how our democratic, scientific, and cultural discourses develop with these objects as participants. However it might go further than that into the composition of new rhetorics built for an object-oriented democracy, as Latour terms it. Doing so begins, I believe, with recognizing that an object-oriented rhetoric does not emerge suddenly as a result of technological developments. It is instead a realization that rhetoric was never and could never have been a solely human province. This is not a wholesale rejection of the theories and philosophy that have shaped our field but rather a recognition of their limits in addressing rhetorical challenges that we can no longer afford to imagine as simply discursive. From living and learning in digital communities to facing up to climate change, we must now compose rhetorics that incorporate technoscientific objects and build a future that includes them rather than divides them from us.

 

composition's process-product problem

Mike Edwards has a provocative post on the process movement that previews a Computers and Writing presentation I hope to attend later this week. Edwards takes up networked accounts of composing, as we see in Jody Shipka and Byron Hawk, as a way of rethinking process, but then is interested in a Marxian analysis of the diachronic nature of process and the "transformation problem" wherein process is reified as product. It's an interesting meditation. I share to some degree the networked approach in Shipka, Hawk, and others. Much network talk in composition stems from cultural-historical activity theory, which in many respects is probably more friendly to Mike's Marxian interests than a Latourian approach. My own view is not so much unfriendly as somewhat out of bounds.

For me, the fundamental ontological problem with composition's process movement is the inherent teleology that links process to product. I think Edwards sees that. Hawk makes a similar observation. And Shipka's careful accounting of compositional networks points to this as well. It's not a matter of better methods or more panoptic technologies capturing eye movements, keystrokes, or brain waves. Process doesn't equal product no matter what. 

In fact, in these terms, there is no such thing as a writing process. There are only retrospective accountings of what I did when I was writing. As if I knew what I was doing. I'm not suggesting that such metacognitive reflections cannot be helpful in one's development into a successful writer (however we want to define success). I'm simply contending that there is a fundamental, uncrossable divide between those accounts and the emergence of a "text" (e.g. this one). Beginning with this premise one might see the transformation problem differently.

The "process" is widely taught to composition students. We always say that it is recursive, but does anyone believe that writing doesn't begin with "invention"? The funny thing about the process is that it's underlying claim is that "this is what professional writers do." Actually what professional writers do is spend hours writing and researching; they have, by definition, made a living doing these things. If we want students to mimic "professional writers" then we shouldn't have them pantomime some ginned-up "process" but have them spend 20+ hours a week writing (and then do that for 10 years if we buy into the 10,000 hours to become an expert calculation). I don't know if I buy that calculation, but I do think there is no substitute for time on task or for the simple and sometimes brutal reality of writing in the wild and trying to make something happen with your words. 

But I've gotten off the topic of process and product, so let me get straight to how I see these things ontologically. If process/product is a false distinction it is because the activities of an object are not simply separable from the object. I am running... on a street, through a neighborhood, in daylight, on May 15th,  etc. etc. Running is a capacity I possess in relation to other objects, an agency that arises through those realtions. Running has its own autopoietic system: what it must do to remain running. Running can be apprehended as both process and product, but neither captures the object in full. Writing is a capacity that arises for me in relation to other objects, like this blogging application and my laptop. Writing is an assemblage in which I participate. In some respects I might say that writing is an assemblage that goes on without me. We can say that writing produces texts, but can we say that without asserting some teleology? Without asserting that the purpose of writing is to produce texts? Or even further, without claiming that writing is defintionally the production of texts and nothing else? Just as every tuneless humming is not a song and every muttering is not a sentence, every writing is not a text. At the same time, objects are more than their processes. This text is other than any accounting of process or activity could ever describe. 

Writing and text share a relation to one another, but it is not a causal or teleological one. Texts may need to be written in order to exist, but they are more than the writing. And writing does not necessarily cause texts to emerge.

In the end, I do believe that metacognitive reflection on one's experiences with writing can be useful. And I do think that getting feedback from an audience can also be valuable. In other words, thinking about your process and thinking about your product can both be helpful. However I have to say that for me these things have had limited value as consciously focused activities, though perhaps they are always operating in the background somewhere.  For me, writing has always been fundamentally about meeting the obligations of the objects I encounter, the demands they put on me, and composing something that works well from them. And here I will quote from Latour in Reassembling the Social we "don’t need to ignore the thickness of any given text, its pitfalls, its dangers, its awful way to make you say things you don’t want to say, its opacity, its resistance, its mutability, its tropism" (124).

Process that.

composing the hominid ecology of the future classroom

I largely agree with Levi Bryant's recent post on hominid ecology. I'm not sure the term will catch on, but his Latourian observations about the intermixing of the natural and the social/cultural make sense to me and I think resonate well with what I've been working on here. In what I imagine would appear as a very different line of thinking, Cathy Davidson has a post exhorting further innovation in online and blended instruction. However, to put this in a straightforward manner, I see the pedagogy Davidson is proposing as acting upon the philosphical realization we see in speculative realism. Rather than siloed disciplinary knowledge, we have an investigation that rejects the modern split between natural and cultural realms. Furthermore, we have a pedagogy that recognizes that learning isn't "social" or "discursive" or "subjective" but a kind of hominid ecology. In some sense, we've had these things in pedagogy for a long time: interdisciplinary courses, learning communities, activity theory approaches to teaching, and so on. However, in those cases there still remained asymmetrical relations. One studied science alongside culture. There were objects in the classroom but they remained mute and subservient to human-social objectives. 

So I spend a lot time thinking about what it would mean to study and teach writing/composition/rhetoric as a hominid ecology (to continue with Byrant's term for a while). And I spend a lot of time thinking about how pedagogy changes as it intersects emerging technologies. These are related thoughts for me. Next year, we'll have around 3500 first-year students entering UB. This is the kind of number I think with. We can study writing in a way that would cut across disciplines in the humanities, social sciences, and sciences: rhetoric, history, philosophy, psychology, anthropology, cognitive science, computer science, biology, etc. I am not suggesting that on some level, well beyond the general education of a composition classroom, specialization and professionalization are not necessary. More than ever it is the case today that one cannot know it all. This is a matter of linking knowledge networks together in new ways, and perhaps even recognizing the networked operation of information and cognition in the first place. 

Rhetoric at least has the potential to be a particular kind of meta-discipline in this context by studying these communicational networks, objects, and practices. On one level it seems reasonable for rhetoricians to focus on symbolic communication (that's a broad enough space) but only if we realize that communication relies upon objects and nonsymbolic exchanges. I've written a fair amount here about a "minimal rhetoric," by which I mean an investigation into the basic requirements for rhetoric to operate. In part one could conceive of this as a historical question, a question of ancestral knowledge to use Meillassoux's term: where does rhetoric begin? Though I am curious about that question, I don't think it is necessary for us to nail down an origin (which is good, given our skepticism regarding origins). It's more important, from my perspective, to conceptualize rhetoric as an ontological phenomenon, specifically as a capacity (to use Delanda's term): that is, as a quality of an object that emerges only in particular relations with other objects. Not all objects have rhetorical capacities and those capacities are not present in every relation. I have taken to thinking of the rhetorical capacity in terms of Deleuze and Guattari's articulation of expression and order-words. Here expression is autonomous and auto-objective. In the expressions that we make, we have the capacity to develop agency and cognition (think about something and say it), but expression is also autonomous from that agency: it becomes its own independent, withdrawing object--a sound, a text, a video, a gesture, and so on. The expression also exists in relation to those who perceive it, though it also withdraws from those perceptions. Expression does not require symbolic behavior; instead symbolic behavior is a kind of expression. The important distinction is that expression does not rely upon solely upon the exchange of physical forces in order to have an effect. Physical forces are required. I need to see or hear an expression for it to affect me. But I am not "blown away" by the sonic force of your words. I might be blown away by what they express though. This can be as true of the way bacterial colonies alter their genetic expressions in order to defeat cheaters in their midst, in chocies made by artificial life, or a potential mate's response to a birdsong as it can be in human conversation. What then becomes relevant is examining the networks/assemblages that operate in relation to that expression, so that the "I do" you say has different implications in different networks, and claims about the environment have different force with a laboratory and peer review to back them up. And this text operates differently here on this blog than if I just wrote it out in my notebook.

These are the kinds of things I think rhetoric can and should be about. It is no longer so productive to focus simply on the discursive, even if we connect discourse some representational notion of ideology and materiality. That's not enough. We cannot abandon those concerns but we must understand how matters of concern are composed in a more expansive way.

Turning back to pedagogy, it is not sufficient to teaching writing as a discursive and subjective process, even if we present those interiorized processes as impinged by ideology. Nor can we think of learning in these terms either. It is not simply enough to think of teaching as a matter of discourse (of discussion, lecturing, reading, and writing) or as subject/student-centered (which allows us ultimately to focus on the activities of individuals, particularly in terms of grades). We need to think more expansively about the role of objects and networks in compositional and pedagogical processes.  

constructing academic knowledge

Levi Bryant has a great post on the problem with the term "construction." I think his point echoes those that Latour has been making for some time. We start with the presumed nature/culture divide of the modern world, but one that is continually unmade in issues ranging from gender, race and sexuality to environment and economics. We have the critical turn of investigating conventionally natural terms as historically constructed, but only be insisting that they are not natural at all but only discursive. I.e., there may be some "natural" characteristics somewhere behind gender (you think?) but we can only access gender as a discursive term. Constructivism, as a term, is tied up in this, with the idea that something that is constructed cannot be natural (i.e. "real").

What constructing ought to denote, but perhaps never will (hence Levi and Latour's calls for a new term), is that the knowledge we produce is another object in the world, made from other objects in the world (including us). As one object among many, the knowledge we produce does not capture/represent in some pure way other objects in the world. It isn't "true" in that sense. As academics we already accept this across the campus. However it also isn't "untrue" or operating in a separate, noncommunicating realm from other objects. It isn't purely discursive or purely social. 

I was thinking about this issue in what is a very mundane context for academics: assessment. I'm on one of a dozen committees helping to prepare for our Middle States evaluation (Middle States is the accreditation agency for universities in our region). That also trickles down to my department where we are having conversations about program assessment and where we also talk about assessment within the composition program. As I see it, the underlying problem that humanists have with assessment is related to this Latourian issue. It is absolutely bizarre if you think about it. I don't believe one could function and survive as a human for very long without implicitly acknowledging that the knowledge we produce about the world is more than purely subjective and discursive. Why charge your mobile phone? Or step on the brakes in your car? Or tap away at a keyboard? Why would one eat food or not try flying from rooftops if one believed that knowledge was purely subjective? Or does one insist that ideology creates the force of gravity? Of course not. No one thinks these things. We simply think that what we do know about the world isn't the world. The difference is subtle and we sometimes fail to see the subtlety. No one believes that we understand what gravity "really" is, but we do believe that our understanding of gravity is real enough for us to take care in high places.

And in my estimation, that's what human knowledge is generally about: not creating a mirror of a real world but creating real enough knowledge objects. Enough for what? I suppose those purposes can change.

But let me return to assessment. Most humanists I have encountered object to assessment because they don't believe the knowledge assessment produces is "real." There is no doubt that assessment knowledge is constructed. In fact, there are elaborate tools and procedures that are involved in producing assessment. However, this does not make assessment less real. Instead, like Latour's story of the scientist who takes the skeptic through his lab one procedure at a time, with assessment one can follow the path and investigate the actor-objects through which knowledge is mediated. As such, the knowledge that is produced connects in a different way with other knowledge. That is, if we follow the same procedures at different sites and/or at different times, the knowledge objects we produce at those different times and places has a stronger relation with one another. It doesn't mean that knowledge is perfect.

The alternative is a kind of anecdotal sharing. And I am fully in support of talking about teaching! As one of my grad school mentors, Steve North, discussed long ago, the "lore" of the hallway and office is one of the central sites of teaching knowledge. Lore has its own kind of networks, its own constructedness. However, lore has a different relationship than assessment to other (knowledge) objects. Conventionally we might say that when we shift from lore to scholarship about teaching that this is a purely discursive shift or that it is about social-power relations. These things are partly true I think, but they are only part of the story. The other part is that research is constructed differently and thus has different strengths in its mediation of network relations, and this construction is not "purely" discursive. It has to do with the world of objects as well. 

So, for example, we might anecdotally say that our undergrads are good at the close reading of texts but struggle with incorporating secondary sources, that they convey a real enthusiasm for the literature they read but are ambivalent about critical methods. (I don't know if any of these things are true. This is purely a hypothetical example.) Actually it's a little more than hypothetical. It reflects broad common assumptions about students and about what is difficult to do in English or more generally in college. These anecdotal things we say about students are largely stable over the years, but interestingly they have little impact on curriculum. We might exchange lore about how we try to address these concerns, but those exchanges do not add up to a substantive change. However we try, to whatever extent we try, anecdotal sharing doesn't create knowledge objects with the force necessary to make change happen. 

I think this is clearly evident.

However, we could start an assessment from the anecdotal hypothesis that students struggle with incorporating secondary sources into their writing. We could create a tool that measures these incorporations so that we might construct some knowledge across the program about student performance that might help us fine tune our anecdotal observations and link them together with greater strength. Then (the big step), we might move the issue out of the student and into the network. That is, rather than identifying poor research practices as a student deficiency, we could understand them as a network effect. We could ask, how could we alter the conditions of the classroom and the curriculum to alter this network effect? This goes far beyond the advice of lore because it demands a significant shift in the conditions in the department: a shift that lore is not strong enough to produce. 

This is why, when it comes to assessment, I always ask "What kind of knowledge would we require in order to make a substantive change?" That question asks not only about the specific knowledge statement but the process by which the knowledge is constructed. Anecdotes are not strong enough. And my concern for the humanities is that it doesn't believe that any knowledge is strong enough to make such decisions. This, of course, does not mean that curriculum doesn't happen or that changes don't occur. It simply means that we deny ourselves the opportunity to produce knowledge that is strong enough to inform decision-making. Instead we are left with individual feelings, opinions, and beliefs and whatever they amount to. A skeptic might say that this is all that humanistic knowledge has ever been. 

But I can't believe that. I can't afford to believe that. If we believe that as humanists we cannot produce knowledge of real value with the strength to make changes in the world, then what would we be doing as teachers or scholars? We would be engaged in some kind of self-pleasuring activity, perhaps with the idea that our performances might instill in others (through some quasi-magical, sympathetic incantation) a similar practice of finding self-pleasure (or aesthetic appreciation) through a purely subjective/cultural/discursive encounter with the objects we study. No doubt there is a strong strand of such thinking in the humanities, especially in English, that goes back at least to Matthew Arnold (though in his case the self-pleasure was imbuded with a chaste religiosity rather than the psycho-sexual implications one probably sees here). However, no one would imagine self-pleasure as the sole goal of humanistic study. We must be able to produce knowledge that has the strength to make changes. And that requires an understanding of how knowledge is constructed and operates in a world that isn't divided into natural, social, and discursive realms. And this is as true for our research and teaching as it is for assessment.

the problem with "robot grading" isn't the robot

Back on this issue one more time but with a different spin that isn't about the robot at all. The question is why has grading/assessment become such a mass industry that it requires automation? And more importantly what does this say about our attitudes toward writing? The typical composition adjunct earns around $2500 per course, about $100-$150 per student. Let's assume that the student is taking an otherwise free-content online course where they are writing 5 5-page papers. To get the level of feedback we currently get from a FYC course, we'd be asking students to pay around $5 per page for feedback.

Think about the things that cost around $5. A venti latte? a foot-long sub? a gallon of gas (nearly)? How about $25 (the cost to review a 5-page paper)? You might spend that going to a movie. Or going out for dinner. Or buying a used video game. Now it's certainly true that there are people in America who would have to think carefully before blowing $25 on a night at the movies. On the other hand, movies are a $10B a year industry. Same with video games. So you might only got out to eat once a month if you're a student on a budget. That's still 12 times a year. That's double the amount of times you'd be asked to pay $25 for someone to read your paper in a composition course: the one composition course that you would take in your entire life!

So basically what we are saying is that getting feedback on your writing is less valuable than going out to the movies. 

Tell me once more how important developing literacy and communication skills is?

However this isn't all about economics or rational decision-making. We need to ask why it is that grading and feedback are so undesirable. More importantly, why has writing become dominated by a curriculum and pedagogy that views writing as such a dull activity? And here I don't mean to impugn my rhet/comp colleagues or the many adjuncts teaching this course. There's some larger, systemic problem here that results in the attitudes we have toward writing.

So rather than saying our problem is how to automate the evaluation of all this writing that no one actually wants to write or read (and that no one even wants to pay $25 to have someone read), I would ask "what would have to happen to make writing into something students would consider worth learning to do well?" 

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